南洋中学英语学习--Frank

考场作文：

你的一生中曾经有许多人帮助过你，曾经有许多事使你感动，通过一件事讲述一下他（她）（它）对你成长的影响。(150字左右，不要写题目) 

Possible Version 1:      08届4班杨  牧

Hong Zhanhui洪战辉, one of the ten outstanding figures in “2005 Touching China”, deeply moved me the moment I knew his deeds.

His father is disabled and his mother ran away, leaving a little brother and an adopted sister, which obliged him to support his family independently. Poor as he is, he declines the help from others; what’s more, he goes to university with his sister.

He sets a good example for not only me but also all the young people today. Because of his courage, he faces all the troubles bravely, positively and optimistically; because of his responsibility, he bears the heavy burden of supporting the whole family without hesitation; because of his love, he perseveres with the arduous task. Those are what I should learn from him.

What he does reveals the real meaning of love. His quality is worth praising; his spirit is worth encouraging; his deed is worth developing. It is his responsibility, his diligence and his perseverance that touch me, inspire me and stimulate me. Never shall I forget his deeds.

Possible Version 2:      08届6班  殷一宁

I have been trained in gymnastics for four years when I was a little young girl. During that time, I got up at six every morning and did very hard exercise. The only thing in our daily life was training, training and training. I felt too tired when I finished it. In my mind arose a very strong feeling that I missed my parents a lot, since the coach in the sports school made it a rule that we couldn't meet our parents until weekend.

At that time, I didn't understand why my parents sent me to the gymnastic school, but now I appreciate what they had done. Four years’ training gave me an unforgettable experience, developed my willpower, and let me learn to be self-dependent. Every time I was in trouble I told myself to resist and never to give up. Though I didn't end up as an athlete, the experience does me life-long good.